class 10.6.10

During last class, we got in groups and read each other our treatments. I believe it has helped me to realize where my writing/ideas are weak. It was helpful to see that the organization of my treatment would have made the storyline make more sense. My group members were too distracted by the disorganization. To me it made sense of course but that's only because I could see the movie playing in my head. They couldn't, so it was good to hear their comments on how I could improve the writing composition. The only thing hard about meeting in groups is having others read your paper. They tend not to read it clearly or they skip over words and I don't feel it helps me very much. But maybe that's just me...In the writing center, they have you read your own paper and it has helped me more doing it that way.